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saberhunter
14-03-07, 03:57 PM
Gday again,

I am very happy that you guys like the story and pics and with all the compliments that I have gathered I just had to send the story to cashy.

I have got the edited story here but i wont put the pics up again because they're in the first story.

Let me know what you think about the finished thing for the mag, as it is probably easier to understand then before and it is tidier etc. and watever else 8)

SH :wink:




My first ever billy by Tim DeGrey

Well after awaiting the weekend that had been planned multiple times because of many personal reasons, Friday lunchtime soon arrived!! The 4wd was loaded full of gear and we hit the road in search of hogs, bunnies, dogs, cats and the odd good billy!

After the hour and 15 minute drive to our destination the car was unloaded, all of my new blackstump broadheads were sharpened to perfection, the bowstring was waxed and the water bottles were filled. We drove to a spot that had been well known for all critters great and small...so we got our webbing on and set off down into a gully and over the next ridge which is infested with pig wallows and diggings.

As soon as we topped the next ridge we spotted three mobs of pigs, one of which had a few corker boars in it and the others were just sows, slips and a few young boars. We planned our attack and were off in the direction that we finally chose!

Once we got the wind right we stumbled on two younger boars feeding towards us but they soon had their snouts in the air when they got on the wrong side of us and were on their merry way down into the gully behind us.

Ben and I stumbled across a sow on heat and three corker boars with her!!! Other than that we didn't manage to get on the right side of anything else for the rest of the night but when we radioed Bens dad on the two way he soon told us that he slipped an arrow into a nice fox that was bedded down just up from a gully next to a log!

We arrived at the car again at about 9.00pm and we then drove back to the homestead for a good nights rest.

The 1500 head of cattle next to the homestead woke us up at 7:30am as we didn't set the alarm the previous night. We had a good feed of pancakes and hot Milo before getting back into the car for the full day Saturday hunt that we had all been waiting for.

We came across a mob of three decent billies so I decided to have a stalk. They decided that they didn't want to let us get any closer when they moved under one tree in the open which gave us about 30cm of tussock to use as cover, so we stood up, gave ém the finger and walked back to the car!

We parked the 4wd next to an old hut and started a bit of a walk around hoping to find that big boar that we were after! When we had walked about 1 km from the 4wd Ben came across a billy's head and horns that he had shot with the 22. a while back

After hunting lots of gullies and ridgelines and not seeing anything more than about 500 plus goats and an old goat head, we agreed to go in search of a bunny or two so we drove the car over to a spot behind a big ridge in the bottom of a gully. Ben got the camera out whilst I got my bow and the radio.
We then set off around the ridge to view the first rabbit warren and also a lone billy sitting just behind a big old apple tree. A closer look at the billy proved that he had nice horns for a first billy.

I put a stalk in and got to within about 8 yards of the bedded billy with just the big old apple tree between me and him, while Ben had the camera rolling just behind me!!! I saw that the billy was bedded down with his bum closest to me so I let a carbon excel tipped with a razor sharp blackstump slip just above and to the right of his tail and into his opposite shoulder taking out both lungs and main arteries. The billy travelled about 15 M downhill and he was all over. The cool thing was that this was my first billy and second goat and it was all caught on film.

The billy scored a nice 91 6/8 DP!

We put a stalk in on a few pigs and we nailed three but all of them were in a too harder situation to find. They were good shots too.

The next day arrived after plenty of rest but nothing became of interest to us except a mob of goats and a hare that scared the heebejeebees out of Ben and I by jumping out from a bunch of tussock about a metre from us!

We arrived back at the homestead for the last time, packed the gear up and made our way home for our memories to be shared for years to come.

Cheers, Tim DeGrey

Garden Gnome!
14-03-07, 04:18 PM
Tim,

I found your story was fine except for this

The next day arrived after plenty of rest but nothing came into out interest except a mob of goats and a hare that scared the s#@t out of Ben and I by jumping out from a bunch of tussock about a metre from us!



Perhaps you could change it to;

The next day arrived after plenty of rest but nothing became of interest to us except a mob of goats and a hare that scared the s#@t out of Ben and I by jumping out from a bunch of tussock about a metre from us!

I have bolded my suggestion, I hope this helps.

saberhunter
14-03-07, 04:42 PM
cheers

SH :wink:

Luke
14-03-07, 05:33 PM
And being a junior...perhaps remove the **** as well? ;)

Garden Gnome!
14-03-07, 05:53 PM
And replace it with BOWJANGGLES :lol:

howie
14-03-07, 08:47 PM
These are some pointers that I believe would improve your story, just my opinion. Leave out any swear words or similar, as it does nothing to improve the value of the story, either does giving them the finger, why on earth would you put that line in is beyond me. I am a firm believer that we should repect the animals we hunt. I also have a strong belief that a wounded animal shouldn't be in the "too harder situation". If they were good hits in the right place they won't be far away. Otherwise back to the target butt till you can put them in the vitals - every shot. If they weren't recovered, leave it out of the story, it does nothing to improve the article stating that game was not recovered. And while I'm on a roll, and this is a general comment, a little thought before taking photos/video footage, remove arrows and clear away excess blood. It certainly improves the quality of the photos and shows respect to the animal. Always have several people proof read and perhaps make suggestions how to improve the adventure you have been on. If you read some articles from some of the respected bowhunters around, you might get some tips that brings the readers along on your journey. Just my 2 cents worth. Howie

saberhunter
14-03-07, 10:57 PM
I am a firm believer that we should repect the animals we hunt. I also have a strong belief that a wounded animal shouldn't be in the "too harder situation". If they were good hits in the right place they won't be far away.

The shots were good, but the pigs could run just that little bit further to get into the thickest scrub they could find :wink: But thanks for the tips anyway :)

I have no more to say, so please keep your constructive critisisms coming (thats a compliment) 8) :)

SH :wink:

saberhunter
14-03-07, 10:58 PM
And replace it with BOWJANGGLES :lol:

HEHEHE :lol: :lol: :lol: 8) :lol:

sparra_gump
15-03-07, 12:07 PM
Nice work saberhunter!.

I've seen shots on goats that take out the heart and a lung and still have to be tracked from blood trail for a good few hundred meters that they ran.

SG

warnie
15-03-07, 05:35 PM
I think your more detailed explanation is what it needs,

"The shots were good, but the pigs could run just that little bit further to get into the thickest scrub they could find "

A good story has the detail to give the reader a good picture of what is going on. Condensed desciptions are fine for this forum but the magazines do better to have fuller descriptions/explanations.

On that note, i think the most intriguing part of the story is the unfolding of the boars around the sow on heat and you skim over this, perhaps reveal it all to us, even if it didn't go to plan.

Well done for having such a good go at this capper. J.W

howie
15-03-07, 08:35 PM
I believe that even if an animal gets into the thickest scrub, you should do your upmost to recover the animal. Be it following blood or spoor, (hoof prints etc) continue searching till all avenues have been exhausted. Possibly widen your search perimeter, check water points, due to body fluid loss, animals seek out water to replenish what they have lost.
At times an animal that has been hit will go to heavy cover, stop and watch his back trail and, depending on where the arrow struck and what damage was done, will bed and that is where you will recover it. On the other hand if you chase an animal and the adrelanine kicks in - it can run along way leaving very little in the way of sign, making recovery very difficult indeed. Hope this helps and it is not a dig at you, only a few suggestions that may help you recover your animals. Hunting is a life long learning curb and we can never learn to much about the game we hunt. Good luck buddy Howie

howie
15-03-07, 08:38 PM
PS - We done in your attempts at bring us along on your hunts, keep them coming. Cheers Howie

saberhunter
16-03-07, 04:14 PM
I believe that even if an animal gets into the thickest scrub, you should do your upmost to recover the animal. Be it following blood or spoor, (hoof prints etc) continue searching till all avenues have been exhausted. Possibly widen your search perimeter, check water points, due to body fluid loss, animals seek out water to replenish what they have lost.

We did just about all that!! :lol: We searched until dark :(

Thanks for all the helpfull hints guys :P :wink:

SH :wink: